Miracles happen in all shapes and forms. You just have to
look for them. Whether it’s getting a lucky hand of cards, finding money, or
surviving a near death experience. Personally I believe my 1/16th
Irish blood really gives me a fourth leaf on my clover. Through my years I have
had three main miracles.
Pulver’s voice slowly fades into the background. Click. Those two? No I can make a strip candy
there! Click. That pair? Whoa no
there are more jelly over there!! Click. One more candy and 14 moves. I can do this. I can’t let my month and a
half of practice fail me now. Click. I,
I, I, did it? I did it!!
“Woohoo! I did it!!”
Courtney hears my yelling an immediately spins around, “You
beat level 79!?!?”
We high five and Pulver gives us the eye.
“I just… figured out how to name that Alkane,” I quickly
attempt to cover for my disruption.
Pulver’s chuckle proves to me that my cover was blown.
Finally the raging water had gone down. Huge tree trunks
filled the small gap beneath the bridge. My mom was on the creek bank and
waiting on me. My task was simple. I was in charge of rapping a large metal
chain around one of the huge logs. The chain was heavy for my arms that were
much smaller at the time. As I stuck my hand in between two pieces of wood, I
creature the size of my hand jumped onto the tree trunk I was standing on. I
quickly ran for the bank. The Wolf Spider chased after me with its legs as big
as fingers. Tears began racing down my checks. Once I reach the safety of the
old wooden bridge, I notice my body is shaking in fear from my hands to my
knees.
Today is Lumberjack Day. I have never completely understood
why each day of homecoming week has to have a theme. I hop into my truck wear
my “lumberjack hat.” The sky is still pitch black due to it being 6:30 AM. Our
FFA Parliamentary Procedure morning practice is the reason for this very early
drive. My dim lights shine on to the continuous gravel road. I use my dims
because they are brighter than my brights which are pointed straight at the
ground. Suddenly a deer is right in front of me. I firmly press the breaks but
the deer is just too close.
Poomff!! Psst!
Lost in confusion, I realize that the dust in the air must
have come out with the airbags. The huge airbags make the road not visible. As
the deflated, I see I am headed straight into the right ditch. I quickly crank
the wheel left. The shifty gravel throws me directly towards the left ditch. My
rims catch. I begin to roll. This is
going to total my pickup for sure. Crack. Roll. Crack.
It’s funny how a person reacts to these life miracles.
Reactions such as over excitement, over emotional, and even over calm often
happen. To this day, I am still unsure why my life never flashed before my eyes
as I was rolling. My only thought was that I would wreck my prized truck. I had
no concern of the face that I could die. If it were to happen over again, I
know the second time around my life would flash before my eyes. Yet, I also
know that I would still be just as calm because I know that my Savior Jesus
Christ is in charge of all of the miracles in my life.

It's like you did a bit of episodic writing here. Good job capturing your moments. In each one you have phrases that don't quite fit (due to the fact, etc). I enjoyed the joke to lead into your writing. Overall very descriptive to show the reader what is going on.
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a really good job, some of the words were missing letters or didn't have the correct letter. Rereading it before posting could be a good idea. Other than that, you did a good job explaining each thing that made you feel like you're very lucky.
ReplyDeleteBecause I sit by you in chemistry, I witnessed you beating level 79. Your reaction was priceless! I liked how you wrote about three completely different things but they all seemed to flow together very nicely. This piece that you wrote proves that miracles of all sizes happen and we need to be thankful for what goes right in our lives. Keep up the good work, Leah!
ReplyDeleteI really like the style you wrote this. I like how each event is more intense than the last. And your description of miracles in the last paragraph was quite deep.
ReplyDeleteI remember that day in chemistry and I didn't realize that that's what it was about. Also, I am deathly afraid of spiders so if that was me I probably would have ran inside and not came out for about two days.
ReplyDeleteI thought you did such a good job setting up the story for your accident. I would have never expected this to go in that direction, but I'm so glad that that is where you took it! I think you can always hear your personality through your writing! I am really impressed! keep up the good work!
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