Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Dream vs. Dream

There was this boy who woke up one night with a nightmare. He cries, “Mummy, Mummy!” His mother came rushing into the bedroom and the boy told her that he had a dream that Grandma died. So a week later, his Grandma died.The boy woke up another night screaming and he told his mother that he dreamt that Grandpa died. Strangely enough, a week later Grandpa died. The boy woke up yet another night screaming that he had a nightmare in which his father died.The mother told the father and he became very cautious. He watched his health and treated his body excellently. So a week passed and the postman died.
     What is a dream? Is it your thoughts at night or your high hopes. These should not be named the same. I do not dream at night about my dreams for the future, nor do I dream of doing my dreams at night in the future.
     Having these two named the same may wreak kids confidence. It tells them that the horrible things that happen in the their dreams are the same thing as what they want for the future. Then, we wonder why children don't want to sleep.
     I have always had scary dreams that skip aroundand do not make any sense. At the end, I usually end up dieing. For example, our house is flooding and I drive the diesel pickup into the water and drown, I am in a sketch old motel and people chase me with needles, or when I am running away from a psychotic killer, I get suck under a fence and he stabs me to death. I have had enough bad dreams to count for 10 people.
     Night dreams should be named mistakes. Then, all of our "mistakes" would happen at night while we are sleeping. Often times our night thoughts are forgotten too. I would definitely enjoy sleeping through and forgetting all of my mistakes.

7 comments:

  1. I liked your honesty and opinion in this. I thought you did a good job portraying what you really felt. I didn't know that you had trouble with nightmares! We talked about bad nightmares and night terrors, and that scares me so much! I think that would be the most frightening thing to deal with. I thought you did a really good job, but you may want to proofread a little more for spelling errors, otherwise I thought it was really good:) Keep it up!!!!

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  2. This was a really good piece. You always have this way of putting complete honesty in your writing which makes it really strong. Rachel is correct when saying that you need to proofread some more. Watch for using the same word, you used the word "mistake(s)" three times. Otherwise, you're writing is really great!

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  3. I really like how your personality really shows through all of your writings thats the great part about reading them because you know every time your gonna get a little different peiece. Great Job!

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  4. The joke at the beginning was an excellent way to introduce your topic. I agree with you that our dreams at night should have a different title than the dreams we have for the future, but I'm not sure if everyone's sleeping dreams are "mistakes." Some people actually enjoy their dreams. It's a cool topic and you expressed it in a creative fashion.

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  5. Interesting reflection. Flesh out this idea just a little bit more with details to explain the two distinctions more. Also, be sure to proofread.

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  6. I didn't get the joke right away but now I do. Good one. It is very true and I have never really thought that "dream" can be such a decieving word.

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